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What's the most popular cold drink among children your age? Explain.

차유진/2024-09-05

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I think the most popular cold drink among children is mango smoothie, Slush and coke. Mango smoothie is sweet, slush is sweet and Fresh and coke is refreshing taste

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Jean~~

What's the most popular cold drink among children your age? Explain.

I think the most popular cold drink among children is mango smoothie, Slush and coke.

>> I think the most popular cold drinks among children are mango smoothies, Slush, and Coke.

Mango smoothie is sweet, slush is sweet and Fresh and coke is refreshing taste

>> Mango smoothie is sweet, slush is sweet and fresh, and Coke has a refreshing taste.