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Do children have to ask permission from their parents when they go out? Explain.

차진혁/2024-09-05

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Yes, children have to ask permission from their parents because if they don't have to ask permission from their parents, it is dangerous. All parents have to know where and who their child do. I always ask permission from my parents when I have promise with my friends.
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Here's your edited essay, Jimmy. I appreciate your sending it. Please go over the revisions given below. Have a good evening there!  


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                                         Do children have to ask permission from their parents when they go out? Explain.


Yes, children have to ask permission from their parents because if they don't have to ask permission from their parents, it is dangerous.
>> Yes, children have to ask permission from their parents because if they don't, it is dangerous.

All parents have to know where and who their child do.
>> All parents have to know where their children are and who they're with. 

I always ask permission from my parents when I have promise with my friends.
>> I always ask permission from my parents when I have appointments with my friends.

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