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오지현/2024-09-05

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Tell me the best vacation you had in your life. -> I went to go Bail. I send in Bail a month. Bail has an amazing ocean view. Bail has an amazing ocean color has so beautiful. I met the turtles in the Bail Ocean.
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I went to go Bail.
>>> I went to Bali

I send in Bail a month.
>>> I spend a month staying in Bali.
>>> I have been to Bali for a month.

Bail has an amazing ocean view.
>>> Bali has an amazing ocean view.

Bail has an amazing ocean color has so beautiful.
>> The ocean has a beautiful color.

I met the turtles in the Bail Ocean.
>>> I saw a lot of turtles in the ocean.
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