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What’s a plan you made as a kid that you still think about today, and would you still want to do it?

임주미/2024-09-05

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
As a kid I had a plan I wanted be English teacher, I had been thinking about my dream. Maybe, I don't know the reason that I am studying untill now.
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Hello, Ju Mi! I admire your perseverance in your studies and your work as well. I believe in you! You can do it! ^^ Have a fun day, Ju Mi!
~. T.  Jewel
As a kid I had a plan I wanted be English teacher, I had been thinking about my dream.
>>As a kid, I had a plan to become an English teacher. I used to think a lot about that dream.
Maybe, I don't know the reason that I am studying untill now.
>>Maybe I don’t know the reason why I’m still studying.
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