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Do you think social media has more positive or negative effects on society?

신봉규/2024-09-04

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
I think social media has more positive effects on society. because social media can enhance people's imagine. and Reading has a good effect on people.
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Hi! I'm so pleased you took the time to complete the homework. You did an excellent job sharing your experiences and ideas—keep up the great work!^^
~~Teacher Ryka^^

I think social media has more positive effects on society. because social media can enhance people's imagine. 
>> I think social media has more positive effects on society because it can enhance people's imagination.
OR >> I believe social media has a greater positive impact on society because it can stimulate and enhance people's imagination.

and Reading has a good effect on people.
 >> Additionally, reading has a beneficial impact on individuals.
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