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If I could one were one color for the rest of my life?
이강임/2024-09-04
회원님의 올려주신 영작문
If I have to were just one color, I would were pink.
of course, It's my favorite color and suits me.
Now I have a lot pink clothes.
why I would were that color it isn't too light or too dark.
if color is too light or too dark, my eyes will get tired easily.
and if I would were one color I might feel depressed.
but pink might comfort me.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Good evening, Audrey!
(^___^)
Thank you so much for this composition.
Pink inspires thoughts of comfort, warmth, and hope. Pink indicates good health, as shown by the phrase "in the pink." It represents achievement with the statement "everything is rosy" and enjoyment with "tickled pink."
This color denotes girlhood and sisterhood, and it is widely popular since it evokes nostalgia and happiness.
See you later in class!^^
__T. Mayleen :)
If I have to were just one color, I would were pink.
of course, It's my favorite color and suits me.
Now I have a lot pink clothes.
>>> If I had to were just one color, I would be pink.
of course, It's my favorite color and suits me.
Now I have a lot pink clothes.
>>> If I had to were just one color, I would be pink.
Of course, it's my favorite color, and it suits me.
Now I have a lot of pink clothes.
why I would were that color it isn't too light or too dark.
if color is too light or too dark, my eyes will get tired easily.
>>> Why would I choose that color? It isn't too light or too dark.
and if I would were one color I might feel depressed.
but pink might comfort me.
if color is too light or too dark, my eyes will get tired easily.
>>> Why would I choose that color? It isn't too light or too dark.
If the color is too light or too dark, my eyes will get tired easily.
but pink might comfort me.
>>> And if I were to wear one color only, I might feel depressed.
But pink might comfort me.
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