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If you could plan a dream trip to any place in the world right now, where would you go and what woul

임주미/2024-09-04

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If I were going to othere country I will go to New York .I'd like to go to the Central Park and city. I want to eat new dish and speak in English with local too.

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Hello, Ju Mi! I can imagine you in these scenarios. Hopefully, you could visit New York soon! Thank you for always doing your homework. I appreciate you taking time doing it despite your busy schedule. Thank you, Ju Mi! ^

~T. Jewel

If I were going to othere country I will go to New York

>>If I were going to another country, I would go to New York, USA.

I'd like to go to the Central Park and city.

>>I'd like to visit Central Park and the city.
I want to eat new dish and speak in English with local too.

>>I want to try new dishes and speak English with the locals, too