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김지숙/2024-09-03

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
I sometimes use a computer when I do my homework.Because the computer conveys various information to me.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Great work, Shin woo! Thank you for your dedication in class. Please take note of all the corrections given below. Thank you!
- Teacher Angela


I sometimes use a computer when I do my homework.
>> I sometimes use a computer while doing my homework.

Because the computer conveys various information to me.
>> Because the computer provides me with various information.
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