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My hometown memory

/2024-09-03

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I did my homework, today. Plz, check the attarchment. Have a nice day. Thank you.
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Hello, Stella! Im amazed by how vividly you described an unforgettable memory from your hometown. I can imagine the scenario you were in. ^^ Thank you for diligently doing your homework. Have a good day!
~T. Jewel
I don't know how old am I. But exactly It's at night.
>>I don't know how old I was, but I remember it was at night.
A floor was in front of my house's door.
>>There was a patio (or porch) in front of my house's door.
I sometimes lied on the floor in spring or falls.
>>I would sometimes lie on the floor in the spring or fall.
I lied on the floor at the night and looked at the dark sky as usual.
>>I laid on the floor that night and looked at the dark sky as usual.
But,I was really surprised in the sky because I've never seen much more the stars before.
>>But I was really surprised by the sky because I had never seen so many stars before.
It seemed like rainning, stars rainning.
>>It seemed like it was raining, with stars falling like rain.
I felt like the stars fall to me and there was in the space.
>>I felt like the stars were falling toward me, and I was floating in space.
I can't forget the memory.
>>I can't forget that memory.