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류건우/2024-09-02
회원님의 올려주신 영작문
Q: How should people do reviews of products or services?
A: I think just giving honest reviews is the best.
If they are not honest, then there might be more people who'd be disappointed about the porduct, and there might be a vicious circle.
But even if they become host, they should not use bad words or review with a bad purpose.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi, Paul!
2. If they are not honest, then there might be more people who'd be disappointed about the porduct, and there might be a vicious circle.
3. But even if they become host, they should not use bad words or review with a bad purpose.
Thank you for doing your homework.
~T. Divina^^
Here are some notes:
1. I think just giving honest reviews is the best.
>>CORRECT!
2. If they are not honest, then there might be more people who'd be disappointed about the porduct, and there might be a vicious circle.
>>If they are not honest, then there might be more people who'd be disappointed about the product, creating a vicious cycle.
3. But even if they become host, they should not use bad words or review with a bad purpose.
>>But even if they become honest, they should not use bad words or review with a bad purpose.
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