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The health risks associated with my lifestyle

양기연/2024-09-02

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

While working in my academy, I sometimes have to finish my supper very quickly. And there are times when I skip my meal or I have late meal. When I have supper too fast or late, I have difficulty digesting food. I used to have severe inflammation on my stomach, but with my constant effort, my hemorrhagic gastritis has been improved. So I'm conscious about regular eating. And I practice slow eating.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Happy Monday, Gi Yean!

I feel you! I used to do the same thing because I thought eating quickly would give me more spare time to rest or do other things. However, you’re right; it makes it difficult to digest food and is indeed unhealthy. It’s great that you’re now more conscious about your health.

- T. Caitlyn

While working in my academy, I sometimes have to finish my supper very quickly.

>> CORRECT

And there are times when I skip my meal or I have late meal.

>> And there are times when I skip my meal or have a late meal.

When I have supper too fast or late, I have difficulty digesting food.

>> CORRECT

I used to have severe inflammation on my stomach, but with my constant effort, my hemorrhagic gastritis has been improved.

>> I used to have severe inflammation in my stomach, but with my constant effort, my hemorrhagic gastritis has improved.

So I'm conscious about regular eating.

>> So I’m conscious about eating regularly.

And I practice slow eating.

>> CORRECT