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김순님/2024-09-02

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China's politics tend to be based on the communism. China insists they are superior to others. They may want to win against America. English education in China is more and more increased . So they need to regulation for balancing the personal education. And the king wanted to show his power to their people including the rich who was spending a lot of money on english education. Patriotic sprits is more important than learning English I think.
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Ms. Sunny!
I agree with the last sentence. The government of China wanted to show other countries that they could control their citizens, so they tried to impose regulations on English because they knew that America would benefit more if their citizens were English speakers.
Aki~

China's politics tend to be based on the communism.
>>> China's politics is based on communism.

China insists they are superior to others.
>>> CORRECT!

They may want to win against America.
>>> They want to win against America.

English education in China is more and more increased .
>>> English education is increasing in China.

so they need to regulation for balancing the personal education.
>>> so they need regulations to balance personal education.

And the king wanted to show his power to their people including the rich who was spending a lot of money on english education.
>>> And the president wanted to show his power to their people including the rich who were spending a lot of money on English education.

Patriotic sprits is more important than learning English I think.
>>> Patriotic sprit is more important than learning English I think.
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