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류건우/2024-08-30

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Q: What activities can you do when you leave work early? A: I think I can work out or do some entertainments. If I leave work early, then I think I would focus on relieving my stress because I might have gotten a lot of stress while working. And I think working out and doing some entertainments are good ways to relieve stress.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Paul!

Thank you for always doing your homework diligently.

~T. Divina^^

Here are some notes:

1. I think I can work out or do some entertainments.

>>CORRECT!

2. If I leave work early, then I think I would focus on relieving my stress because I might have gotten a lot of stress while working.

>>If I leave work early, I think I would focus on relieving my stress because I might have gotten a lot of it while working.

3. And I think working out and doing some entertainments are good ways to relieve stress.

>>CORRECT!