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최서연/2024-08-30

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Actually, I can speak only two, Korean and English. So, English is the hardest of two. Because English requires a lot of concentration when I try to communicate to understand context. That's why I get so tired to speak English. Sometimes, I feel more comfortable using body language than speaking English.
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Thank you, Seo Yeon, for completing your first composition ^^
I am looking forward to reading and checking more ^^ Keep doing good homework :) 
Chammy

Actually, I can speak only two, Korean and English.
>> Actually, I can only speak Korean and English.
So, English is the hardest of two. 
>> For me, English is the hardest of the two.
Because English requires a lot of concentration when I try to communicate to understand context. 
>> Because English requires a lot concentration to focus on understanding context when I try to communicate in English. 
That's why I get so tired to speak English. 
>> That's why I get so tired of speaking English.
Sometimes, I feel more comfortable using body language than speaking English.
>>  Correct
OR
>> Sometimes, I feel more at ease communicating through gestures than speaking in English. 
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