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류건우/2024-08-29

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Q: What time do you want to be in and out of school? Why? A: I think the time I go to school now is fine, and I want it to be ended earlier. I tihnk the time it is starting is fine becuase it's the time when I get up and prepare for going to school. But if I stay in school for so long, it gets boring, so I want it to be done earlier.
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Hi, Paul!

Thank you for answering your homework!

~T. Divina^^

Here are some things to consider:

1. I think the time I go to school now is fine, and I want it to be ended earlier.
>>I think the time I go to school now is fine, and I want it to end earlier.

2. I tihnk the time it is starting is fine becuase it's the time when I get up and prepare for going to school.
>>I think the time it starts is fine because it's the time when I get up and prepare to go to school.

3. But if I stay in school for so long, it gets boring, so I want it to be done earlier.
>>But it gets boring if I stay in school for too long, so I want it to be done earlier.

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