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Homework0829

오혜영/2024-08-29

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

Hi, I did homework. Would you please check the attatchment? There is the homework in it. thanks.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello, Stella! You are indeed a good listener! I've also noticed how you always smile in our classes. ^^ Thank you for taking time to do your homework today. Have a great day ahead. See you next week!

~T. Jewel

I think the best personality traits are carefully listening and response with smiling.

>>I think my best personality traits are being a good listener and responding with a smile.

I'm going to write my case, because I think most people are similar with my thoughts.

>>I'm going to write about my case because I believe many people share similar thoughts.

They make me comfortable and I can have a conversation more naturally.

>>They make me feel comfortable, allowing me to have conversations more naturally.

Also I feel like to make a friend like these person.

>>I also feel like I would like to make friends with people like them.