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If you could swap one part of your daily routine with a fun activity, what would you choose and why?

임주미/2024-08-29

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

I will swap one of my dalily routine to swim. Recently I wanted to swim, this early I stopped to learn swiming and try again.I think I feel freedom in the water likes a mermaid.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello, Ju Mi! You made me smile when I read that you wanted to swim freely like a mermaid. ^^ I hope you can swim again soon! Thank you for doing your homework. Have a great day!

~T. Jewel

I will swap one of my dalily routine to swim.

>>I will swap one of my daily routines for swimming.

Recently I wanted to swim,

>>Recently, I’ve been wanting to swim.

this early I stopped to learn swiming and try again.

>>I stopped learning to swim for a while, but now I want to give it another try.

I think I feel freedom in the water likes a mermaid.

>>I feel a sense of freedom in the water, like a mermaid.