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Do you like being at home alone? Why or why not?

김영순/2024-08-28

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

Basically, I like being at home alone. So I can rest anytime without interference, do housework , do my leisure and get energy. Sometimes,I need to get along with my friends and do hobbies also too. As a office worker,I share my time depending on my health condition.

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Hi Young Soon!
Great job today!
I love how things are progressing.
I hope you will be consistent in your work.
Keep it up!^^
~~ Teacher Sharon

Basically, I like being at home alone.

>> Correct

So I can rest anytime without interference,

>> It's so that I can rest without any interference.
do housework , do my leisure and get energy.

>> I do housework, enjoy my leisure time and get back my energy.
Sometimes,I need to get along with my friends and do hobbies also too.

>> Sometimes, I need to spend time with with my friends and spend time on my hobbies, too.
As a office worker,I share my time depending on my health condition.

>> As an office worker, I share my time depending on my health condition.