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Describe an old friend that you got in touch with again. How did you get in contact?

박소은/2024-08-28

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

I haved touch with my friend again because of my dad my dad had my friend's phone number so I haved touch by with my dad phone.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi Sunny!
Great job today!
I love how things are progressing.
I hope you will be consistent in your work.
Keep it up!^^
~~ Teacher Sharon

I haved touch with my friend again because of my dad my dad had my friend's phone number so I haved touch by with my dad phone.

>> I got in touch with my friend again by using my dad's phone because he has the number I needed to call.