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류건우/2024-08-28

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Q: What kind of student do you want to be when you're in high school? in college? A: I just want to be a normal student with passion. I don't want to be a special student because I don't like getting attention of a lot of people. Also, I want to study hard and live a satisfying life.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Paul!

Thank you for answering your homework.

~T. Divina^^

Here are some notes:

1. I just want to be a normal student with passion.

>>CORRECT!

OR>>I just want to be a normal but passionate student.

2. I don't want to be a special student because I don't like getting attention of a lot of people.

>>I don't want to be a special student because I don't like getting attention from a lot of people.

3. Also, I want to study hard and live a satisfying life.

>>CORRECT!