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What were mornings like in your house when you were a kid?

박소은/2024-08-28

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when I was a kid, Every weekend I enjoyed watching Disney Animation TV shows. The Mickey mouse, Donald ducks and Guppy... They were very interesting. Kelly, I was absent today class because I has been bad condition as I think I caught the corona virus. I'm very sorry.
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Hello Anna!^^
Thank you for letting me know. I'm sorry to hear you're not feeling well. Please take care of yourself and rest. Get well soon!
~Kelly^^
when I was a kid, Every weekend I enjoyed watching Disney Animation TV shows.
>> When I was a kid, I enjoyed watching Disney animated TV shows every weekend.
The Mickey mouse, Donald ducks and Guppy... They were very interesting.
>> Mickey Mouse, Donald Duck, and Goofy... They were very interesting.
>> Mickey Mouse, Donald Duck, and Goofy were always so entertaining.
Kelly, I was absent today class because I has been bad condition as I think I caught the corona virus.
>> Kelly, I was absent from today's class because I've been feeling unwell, and I think I may have caught the coronavirus.
>> Kelly, I missed today's class because I haven't been feeling well, and I suspect I might have caught the coronavirus.
I'm very sorry.
>> Correct
OR:
>> I sincerely apologize.
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