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Write about the importance of setting goals. How do personal goals impact your motivation and succes

이진태/2024-08-28

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
If I didn't set a spesific goal for something that needed a long period like a speking English fluent, I would need more time. beacuse, I would face more trial and errors. Goal helps us to do not miss directionality. that's why the goal is important.
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Hi there! I’m so pleased you completed the homework. You did an excellent job sharing your thoughts and ideas—keep up the great work!^^
~~Teacher Ryka^^


If I didn't set a spesific goal for something that needed a long period like a speking English fluent, I would need more time.
>> If I didn't set a specific goal for something that requires a long period, like becoming fluent in English, it would take me more time.

beacuse, I would face more trial and errors.
>> This is because I would encounter more trial and error.

Goal helps us to do not miss directionality. that's why the goal is important.
>>  Goals help us maintain direction, which is why they are important.
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