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Think about a time when you struggled with procrastination on a Thursday. What was the outcome, and

이진태/2024-08-28

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
Thursday is hardest day of the week. There is no energy on thursday, but working day is still remaining for two days. However, I can find some hope from afternoon on thursday. I know that time goes continously and weekend come someday, so I'm trying to do not suffer stress from this.
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Hi! I’m delighted you dedicated time to completing the homework. You did a wonderful job expressing your experiences—keep up the great effort!^^
~~Teacher Ryka^^

Thursday is hardest day of the week.
>>Thursday is the hardest day of the week. 

There is no energy on thursday, but working day is still remaining for two days.
>>There's no energy left on Thursday, yet two more workdays remain.

However, I can find some hope from afternoon on thursday.
>> However, I find some hope in the afternoon on Thursday. 

I know that time goes continously and weekend come someday, so I'm trying to do not suffer stress from this.
>>I know that time keeps moving and the weekend will eventually come, so I try not to stress about it.
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