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Who do you think is the best author in Korea or the world?

차유진/2024-08-27

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I think John Burningham is the best author in the world because I love the books written by him. For example "Mr. Gumpy's Drive", "Mr. Gumpy's Boating", "Christmas present"
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                                        Who do you think is the best author in Korea or the world?


I think John Burningham is the best author in the world because I love the books written by him.
>> OR: I love John Burningham's works so I think he's the best author in the world. 

For example "Mr. Gumpy's Drive", "Mr. Gumpy's Boating", "Christmas present"
>> For example, "Mr. Gumpy's Drive", "Mr. Gumpy's Boating", and "Christmas Present", just to name a few. 
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