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Do your ever give up waiting for people who are late? How long can you wait?

차진혁/2024-08-27

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I don't ever give up waiting for people or wait long time. I'll tell you when happen the experience to me. If I wait for people, I can wait up to 30 minutes.
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                     Do you ever give up waiting for people who are late? How long can you wait?


I don't ever give up waiting for people or wait long time.
>> I never give up waiting for people or waiting for a long time. 

I'll tell you when happen the experience to me.
>> I'll share with you my experience. 

If I wait for people, I can wait up to 30 minutes.
>> OR: I can wait for as long as 30 minutes for someone. 
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