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If you had a magic wallet that could instantly provide anything your family needs, what would be the

임주미/2024-08-27

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
The question makes me cheerful.If I use the chance first I will get a car for my daughter, i want to provide fresh vegitables every moring and tennise skirt
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Hello, Jui Mi! I would want to have magic wallet, too! ^^Thank you for sharing your insights. I enjoyed reading your answers. I hope you'll have fun today. Enjoy your Tuesday!^^
~T. Jewel
The question makes me cheerful.
>>The question makes me feel cheerful.
If I use the chance first I will get a car for my daughter.
>>If I get the chance, the first thing I would do is get a car for my daughter.
i want to provide fresh vegitables every moring and tennise skirt
>>I also want to have fresh vegetables every morning and a tennis skirt.
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