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Write about a time when you had to work in a team.

신봉규/2024-08-26

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
- What was the project or goal your team was working on? Our Team's goal is smooth operation of program - What role did you play in the team? I operate main program and occur errors. - What were the challenges and successes, and what did you learn from the experience? I feel a sense of accomplishment and joy of recognition.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi! I’m so happy you put in the effort to complete the homework. You did a brilliant job sharing your experiences—keep up the great work!^^
~~Teacher Ryka^^


Our Team's goal is smooth operation of program
>> Our team’s goal was to ensure the smooth operation of the program.

I operate main program and occur errors.
>>I operate the main program and handle any errors that occur.

I feel a sense of accomplishment and joy of recognition.
>> I experienced a sense of accomplishment and the joy of recognition.
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