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Do you like being at home alone? Why or why not?

박소은/2024-08-26

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
No, I hate being at home alone because it's scary.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi Sunny!
Be careful with showing relationship and connection between different parts of sentences.
Choose the appropriate ideas to express what you mean.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
No, I hate being at home alone because it's scary.
>> Correct
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