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Do you sometimes compete with your friends? In what way?

이진태/2024-08-26

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

When I was younger, I competed something with my friends, like a sports and game. It was natural competition. We competed our ranking in the game or one on one in the sports.

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Hi! I'm so pleased you took the time to complete the homework. You did an excellent job sharing your experiences and ideas—keep up the great work!^^

~~Teacher Ryka^^

When I was younger, I competed something with my friends, like a sports and game.
>> When I was younger, I competed in various activities with my friends, like sports and games.

It was natural competition.
>> The competition was natural.

We competed our ranking in the game or one on one in the sports.
>> We would compete for rankings in the game or go one-on-one in sports.