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Imagine a day in the life of a character who has the power to stop time. How would you use this powe

이진태/2024-08-26

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
If I have power to stop the time, I would use when I move to somewhere. then, I would have more time than others. It is very useful.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi! I’m thrilled that you took the time to complete the homework. Your experiences and ideas were shared wonderfully—keep up the fantastic work!^^
~~Teacher Ryka^^


If I have power to stop the time, I would use when I move to somewhere. 
>>If I had the power to stop time, I would use it when moving somewhere. 

then, I would have more time than others.
>>As a result, I would gain more time than everyone else.

It is very useful.
>>It would be very useful.
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