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What is the best part of your childhood?

이진태/2024-08-26

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
I can imagine happy something, when I heard the word "childhood". maybe, because there were no worries. In childhood, children do only plays without worries. It's a best part of childhood.
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Hello! I'm so glad you made the effort to finish the homework. You did an outstanding job expressing your thoughts—keep up the excellent work!^^
~~Teacher Ryka^^


I can imagine happy something, when I heard the word "childhood". maybe, because there were no worries.
>> I can imagine something happy when I hear the word 'childhood.'  Maybe it's because there were no worries.

In childhood, children do only plays without worries.
>> In childhood, children only play without concerns.  

It's a best part of childhood.
>> That's the best part of childhood.

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