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Plastic surgery

양기연/2024-08-26

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I have little considered any plastic surgery on my face or body. I value individuality and I am relatively satisfied with my appearance and body shape. I have never wanted to look like some celebrities or be pretty like some actresses. These days, many young people want to have plastic surgery. I don't disagree with or object to their ideas of plastic surgery, but I want to teach how to love their individualities.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Happy Monday, Gi Yean!

It's nice to know that you are happy with your appearance and that you value individuality. I agree; even if we don’t think about it much, I also believe there’s nothing wrong with people wanting to look better through plastic surgery.

- T. Caitlyn

I have little considered any plastic surgery on my face or body.

>> I have rarely considered any plastic surgery on my face or body.

I value individuality and I am relatively satisfied with my appearance and body shape.

>> CORRECT

I have never wanted to look like some celebrities or be pretty like some actresses.

>> I have never wanted to look like celebrities or be as pretty as some actresses.
These days, many young people want to have plastic surgery.

>> CORRECT

I don't disagree with or object to their ideas of plastic surgery, but I want to teach how to love their individualities.

>> I don’t disagree with or object to their ideas of plastic surgery, but I want to teach them how to love their individuality.