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What is the most expensive item you have purchased, and do you think it was worth the price?

임주미/2024-08-26

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I bought a watch 10 years ago .It's very expencive my whole life .The brand is Rolex. I wanted to get the watch for a long time .I love it and I will hand dawn to my daughter.

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Hi, Ju Mi! I’m sure your daughter will love the watch! Enjoy your Monday today! ^^ Take care~

~T. Jewel

I bought a watch 10 years ago.

>>CORRECT

It's very expencive my whole life .

>>It’s the most expensive thing I’ve bought in my whole life.

The brand is Rolex.

>>CORRECT
I wanted to get the watch for a long time .

>>I’ve wanted to get that watch for a long time.

I love it and I will hand dawn to my daughter.

>>I love it and I plan to pass it down to my daughter.