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Reflect on a time when you faced midweek challenges. How did you overcome them, and what motivated y

신봉규/2024-08-23

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
First, I start my challenges. As i do it, I can see which direction I go. As i complete them one by one, I can complete all challenges.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi! I’m so happy you put in the effort to complete the homework. You did a brilliant job sharing your experiences—keep up the great work!^^
~~Teacher Ryka^^


First, I start my challenges.
>> First, I start with my challenges.

 As i do it, I can see which direction I go. 
>> As I work on them, I can see which direction I am heading.

As i complete them one by one, I can complete all challenges.
>>By completing them one by one, I am able to overcome all the challenges.
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