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About my friends

박준현/2024-08-23

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

I have many friends. And some friends are funny, kind, or good. And many people have each's best friend. I have best friend too. Today, I introduce my best friend. I met my friend last year. I met him in my classroom. He and I also love League of Lengends, and we now each other. And he and I also like same E sports team, T1. And before that time every day we play together. And this time, I played game with my friend too. I think friend is very greatful thing.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello, John! Thank you for introducing your best friend to me. I hope your friendship lasts for a long time!

-T. Sonny

I have many friends.

>>Correct!

And some friends are funny, kind, or good.

>>Some of them are funny, kind, or good.

And many people have each's best friend.

>>Many of us have our own bestfriend.

I have best friend too.

>>I have a best friend, too.

Today, I introduce my best friend.

>>Today, I will tell you about my bestfriend.

I met my friend last year.

>>I met him last year.

I met him in my classroom.

>>We first met in our classroom.

He and I also love League of Lengends, and we now each other.

>>We both love League of Legends and we know each other.

And he and I also like same E sports team, T1.

>>We also like the same E-sports team called T1.

And before that time every day we play together.

>>Before that time, we played together everyday.

And this time, I played game with my friend too.

>>And currently, we play games together, too.

I think friend is very greatful thing.

>>I think, having a friend is a great thing.