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How do you typically spend your weekends, and what do you believe this says about your priorities an

이진태/2024-08-23

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

I typically rest at home on the weekends. because a rest is my priori desire. if I have a energy after the rest, I sometimes go out with my wife. I sometimes watch the sports games. I believe that spending a time is related to my priorites and lifestyle.

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Hi! I’m thrilled that you took the time to complete the homework. Your experiences and ideas were shared wonderfully—keep up the fantastic work!^^

~~Teacher Ryka^^

if I have a energy after the rest, I sometimes go out with my wife. I sometimes watch the sports games.
>> If I have energy after resting, I sometimes go out with my wife. I also occasionally watch sports games.

I believe that spending a time is related to my priorites and lifestyle.
>> I believe that how I spend my time reflects my priorities and lifestyle

I typically rest at home on the weekends. because a rest is my priori desire.
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I typically rest at home on the weekends because rest is my top priority.