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What is your favorite water activity?

이진태/2024-08-23

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
Swimming is my favorite activity in the every water activities. I learened swimming for a four to five years when I was thirty years old. I believe that fitness is boring but swimming is a funny sports.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hello! I'm really pleased you took the time to finish the homework. Your insights and ideas were shared excellently—keep up the fantastic work!^^
~~Teacher Ryka^^


Swimming is my favorite activity in the every water activities.
>> Swimming is my favorite of all water activities.

I learened swimming for a four to five years when I was thirty years old.
>>  I learned to swim for four to five years when I was thirty years old.

I believe that fitness is boring but swimming is a funny sports.
>>  I find fitness routines boring, but swimming is a fun sport.

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