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What do you think is the best sport in the world? Explain your choice.

차유진/2024-08-22

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I think the best sport in the world is football(soccer) because football is famous, and I like it.　(＾ω＾) Also football is easy for every enjoy.
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Here's your corrected essay for you, Yale. Many thanks for sending it. Please take a look at the few revisions and alternative expressions provided. Good night! 


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                  What do you think is the best sport in the world? Explain your choice.


I think the best sport in the world is football(soccer) because football is famous, and I like it.　(＾ω＾)
>> OR: I think the best sport in the world is football or soccer because it's famous globally, and I love it. 

Also football is easy for every enjoy.
>> Also, football is easy for everyone to enjoy. 

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