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What's your thought on Korean man seving in the military?

차진혁/2024-08-22

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I think Korean man serving in the military is unfair. So I think Korean man and woman must equally serve in the military because they are all the same Korean.
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Here's your edited essay, Jimmy. I appreciate your sending it. Please go over the revisions given below. Good evening there!  


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I think Korean man serving in the military is unfair.
>> I think it's unfair for Korean men to serve in the military. 

So I think Korean man and woman must equally serve in the military because they are all the same Korean.
>> So I think Korean men and women must equally serve in the military because they are all Koreans. 
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