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김지숙/2024-08-22

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I don't like taking medicine because taking medicine is not a good thing. I take medicine very sometimes.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Great work, Shin Woo! Focus on expanding your vocabulary and grammar skills.

- Teacher Angela

I don't like taking medicine because taking medicine is not a good thing.

>> I don't like taking medicine because it's not a good thing.

I take medicine very sometimes.

>> I take medicine only occasionally.