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류건우/2024-08-22

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Q: When is the best time to have a meal with a bigger group? A: I think it's when the group has something special happened. People usually have a meal with a group, it's because they have special thing happened, and to celebrate that special thing. I think it would also be the special day for the group like the day when a group was made.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi, Paul!

Thank you for doing your homework.

~T. Divina^^

Here are some notes:

1. I think it's when the group has something special happened.
>>I think it's when the group has something special that happened.

2. People usually have a meal with a group, it's because they have special thing happened, and to celebrate that special thing.
>>People usually have a meal with a group because a special thing happened, and they want to celebrate that special thing.

3. I think it would also be the special day for the group like the day when a group was made.
>>I think it would also be the special day when the group was made.

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