I agree that parents undeniably hold a fundamental role in raising a child. From birth , they provide fundamental experiences that shape a child's understanding of the world which are emotional and moral guidence, initial socialization, and education and learning. However, while parents play a central role, outside influence also significantly impact a child's develpment which are peer relationship, educational institutions, media and technology, and community and socail environment. So I think that parents and external influences should interact dynamically in shaping a child's development.

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I agree that parents undeniably hold a fundamental role in raising a child.

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 From birth , they provide fundamental experiences that shape a child's understanding of the world which are emotional and moral guidance, initial socialization,  education and learning. 

>>> CORRECT~!^^

However, while parents play a central role, outside influence also significantly impact a child's development which are peer relationship, educational institutions, media and technology, and community and social environment. 

>>> CORRECT~!^^

So I think that parents and external influences should interact dynamically in shaping a child's development.

>>> CORRECT~!^^