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Writing task: What is the color of your bedroom? Why did you choose that color?

김명기/2024-08-22

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

My beroom's color is white. I didn't choose that color. My house is rental house so color was choosen previous people. I think white color makes room looks big. And it feels more comfortable than other colors. I will keep this color continuously.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, MK!

Thank you for doing your homework. I see! I agree with you. I am also renting, so the color of my apartment was decided by the owner. I also think white is a nice color since it can make your room brighter, but on the other hand, it’s hard to maintain.

- T. Caitlyn

My beroom's color is white.

>> My bedroom's color is white.
I didn't choose that color.

>> CORRECT

My house is rental house so color was choosen previous people.

>> My house is a rental, so the color was chosen by the previous occupants.
I think white color makes room looks big.

>> I think white color makes the room look bigger.
And it feels more comfortable than other colors.

>> CORRECT
I will keep this color continuously.

>> I will keep this color.