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Have you ever had a dream that seemed impossible?

이진태/2024-08-22

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I'm a realistic person. so, I've set a goal making possible. However I dreamt a impossible dream, such as winning a lottery. I even set a plan after winning a lottery.
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Hi there! It’s great to see you completed the homework. You shared your ideas beautifully—keep up the amazing work!^^
~~Teacher Ryka^^


I'm a realistic person. so, I've set a goal making possible.
>> I'm a realistic person, so I've set goals that are achievable. 

However I dreamt a impossible dream, such as winning a lottery.
>> However, I also dream of impossible things, like winning the lottery.

I even set a plan after winning a lottery.
>> I’ve even made plans for what I would do if I won.
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