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What is the most important lesson in life that you have learned?

임주미/2024-08-22

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

I think I had been learning many things with work, people,money and realtionship. The most impotant one of them is person becouse everything comes from human happinest,love,sadness ans achivement etc

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Hi, Ju Mi! Thank you for sharing such a wonderful insight about life. Have fun today! Take care!^^

~T. Jewel

I think I had been learning many things with work, people,money and realtionship.

>>I think I’ve learned a lot about work, people, money, and relationships.
The most impotant one of them is person becouse everything comes from human happinest,love,sadness ans achivement etc

>>The most important one of these is people because everything comes from human experiences—happiness, love, sadness, achievements, and more.