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김순님/2024-08-22

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
People might think I am wired. But I think Olympic didn't make good relationship among the countries. There is a few countries that get award medal. Most of them are wealthy. The other countries people can feel lack of something among the strong countries.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Ms. Sunny!
In the past, the purpose of the Olympics is "camaraderie" which is to build good relationships among countries. However, for some athletes and countries who don't have sportsmanship, it became a competition, showing which country is better in one area.
Good day ahead!
T. Aki~


People might think I am wired.
>>> People might think I am weird.

But I think Olympic didn't make good relationship among the countries.
>>> But I think the Olympics didn't create good relationships among the countries.

There is a few countries that get award medal.
>>> There is a few countries that get award medals.

Most of them are wealthy.
>>> CORRECT!

The other countries people can feel lack of something among the strong countries.
>>> The other countries people can feel a lack of something among the strong countries.

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