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Imagine a day in the life of a character who has the power to stop time. How would you use this powe

신봉규/2024-08-21

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
If i have the power to stop time, I would do hobbies I normally wouldn't do. I want to travel, study, and use my time efficiently.
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Hi! I’m thrilled that you took the time to complete the homework. Your experiences and ideas were shared wonderfully—keep up the fantastic work!^^
~~Teacher Ryka^^

If i have the power to stop time, I would do hobbies I normally wouldn't do. I want to travel, study, and use my time efficiently.
>> If I had the power to stop time, I would pursue hobbies I normally wouldn’t. I’d want to travel, study, and use my time more efficiently.
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