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류건우/2024-08-21

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

Q: Who are the kinds of people whom you want to hang out with? A: It's the people who have the common interests with me. If people who I hangout with don't have any common interests with me, it would be hard for us to choose a topic to talk about. Also, I want a person who doesn't really say so much.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Paul!

Thank you for doing your homework.

~T. Divina^^

Here are some things to take note of:

1. It's the people who have the common interests with me.

>>It's the people who have common interests with me.

2. If people who I hangout with don't have any common interests with me, it would be hard for us to choose a topic to talk about.

>>If the people whom I hang out with don't have any common interests with me, it would be hard for us to choose a topic to talk about.

3. Also, I want a person who doesn't really say so much.

>>CORRECT!