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Can you share any interesting stories or memorable experiences you've had while in New York?

박소은/2024-08-21

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My most memorable experience is that of Central Park. There are many famous restaurants around the park and there is also a lake within the park. I have fond memories of riding a boat on a beautiful lake.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Good morning, Anna!^^

That sounds like a wonderful experience! Central Park is such a beautiful place to explore. Have a good day!

~Kelly^^

My most memorable experience is that of Central Park.

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>> My most memorable experience is visiting Central Park.

There are many famous restaurants around the park and there is also a lake within the park.

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>> There are many famous restaurants around the park, and there's also a lake inside the park.

I have fond memories of riding a boat on a beautiful lake.

>> Correct

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>> I have fond memories of boating on the beautiful lake.