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What are some healthy habits you try to maintain in your daily routine?
박소은/2024-08-21
회원님의 올려주신 영작문
I would like to say my healthy habits is eating a fresh tomato and intaking a lactobacillus capsule every morning.
Those things are help me to maintain my healthy.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi Anna!
That sound really healthy! Eating fresh tomatoes and taking lactobacillus capsules sound like excellent habits to stay healthy.
~Kelly^^
I would like to say my healthy habits is eating a fresh tomato and intaking a lactobacillus capsule every morning.
>> I would like to say my healthy habits include eating a fresh tomato and taking a lactobacillus capsule every morning.
Those things are help me to maintain my healthy.
>> These habits help me maintain my health.
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